Posted by paelo on June 11, 2005 at 06:23 AM | got something to say?
well, to those of you who read the draft (the middle part...yung nagaaway si Liam and his dad) this is chapter one! hahaha! im not entirely sure about it though...in fact, i think it kinda sucks @_@ so, comment nalang kayo para ma improve ko. oh, and in case your wondering about the tagalog words, nasa philippines nga sila eh...hehe magaling lang sila lahat mag english! read on!
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*this story happens in a non existent city in located uhh….somewhere in the Philippines”
Some people are gifted with intelligence. Some with skill in a specific sport, skilled in a specific art, while some people are blessed with attractive physical features. We all have our own gifts, and our own weaknesses. And yet two 14 year old boys, Liam Velvet and Curtis Flaxen, seemed to be a step higher than everyone else. Liam was a jet blacked haired boy…a heartthrob. Many women would tell you about his “boyish charm” At the same time, He got very good grades and was a genius Soccer player. He was known throughout Sageworth academy for his well-rounded ness and angelic, kind heart. Curtis was a Blonde haired pretty boy; who was also very popular with girls (and half girls). He was also highly intelligent and had a beautiful singing voice and a talent for composing beautiful songs. Liam and Curtis we’re inseparable. Leaving girls smitten and swooning when they would walk together along the campus, mysteriously, Liam (though him and Curtis were really BIG flirts) never courted anyone. While Curtis currently had a girlfriend, a half French, half Filipino girl named Anoinette. Liam and Curtis…are not like everyone else, they are not human, for starters. Liam and Curtis are Nephilim. Sons of Fallen Angles. The descendants of those who followed Lucifer when he rebelled against God. They were both very much aware of what they were, that is why they stuck together. Fallen angels and Nephilim are not allowed to set foot on heaven. The story begins while Liam and Curtis are eating lunch in the school cafeteria…
“Curtis, they’re doing it again…”
“hahaha! Haven’t you got used to it by now?”
“yeah well..i am but it still feels weird…”
“...”
“hey curtis…”
“what?”
“shouldn’t YOU be waving at THEM by now?”
“oh..right, right..”
Curtis waves at a group of giggling girls sitting on the table opposite theirs
“look, Liam…its Hale…”
“…”
“sigh…”
“she’s so beautiful, Curtis…”
“why dontcha just talk to her?”
“…”
“cmon, you know as well as I do that every girl in this school thinks we’re both really cute”
“…”
“totoy ka talaga! Hahaha!”
“yeah yeah…put a sock in it…”
“tsss…cmon, why dontcha just say hi?! Saying naman ung ‘boysih’ charm mo!”
“…”
“hehehe…fine, ako nalang!”
Curtis stands up and walks toward Hale
“HOY! ANO BA! WAG GAGO!”
Liam instantly stands up and spills his iced tea on his uniform
“liam…pffft” curtis laughs his ass off
“ergh…uh…hiya Hale ehehehe?”
Liam finally manages to say hi to Hale…he sees her laugh softly and smile at him
“hahaha…be more careful next time”
Someone says “ang cute ni Liam…” somewhere in the canteen
“see ? that wasn’t too hard, eh?”
“….the girls were LAUGHING, dumb ass”
“hahaha! Ang dami ngang na cute-tan sayo eh! You should be more confident in yourself!”
“damn…now im gonna have to go through this whole day with an ICED TEA stain on my shirt…”
“okay lang yan! Now, step 2…ask for Hale’s Yahoo id! Tapos i-befriend mo siya!”
“……….”
“what? You chat with some other girls in y!m, how is Hale any different?”
“well, yun nga eh…she’s Hale…kinakabahan ako sa kanya”
“tsss…torpe ka talaga! Kaya mo yan, ako bahala sayo!”
Hale’s group of girls pass by
“ah! Look, Liam.”
Liam and Curtis walk over to them
“hey girls” greeted Curtis
“umm..uhh…hi?” said Liam, which was barely heard
“so hale, my…” curtis says this in a fancy, british accent “associate, young Liam here”
“were THE SAME AGE, dumb ass” liam whispers this “psst, curtis, ako na…”
“umm…Hale, I was wondering if I could chat with you sometime? On y!m?”
The girls giggle and “Liam’s so cute when he’s nervous” and “ang gwapo ni Curtis” phrases are heard in the background. Curtis whispers “don’t blow it now, dimwit…”
“sure…add me nalang…Halrianna99@yahoo.com”
“umm..okay..thanks”
“bye, ladies” said Curtis
Liam quickly walks away, his eyes twitching in annoyance and nervousness because of the constant giggling while Curtis soon follows suit.
“liam”
“…huh?”
“demon hunting tayo mamaya! Hehe!”
“hehe..sure…paramihan ulit!”
“where do you want?”
“you pick. I picked last time”
“hmm….”
“the abandoned construction site…should be lots of hell spawn there”
“agreed…hehehe”
“hmm…”
“what is it, Liam?”
“hehe…loser pays for pizza!”
“SIGE BA! HEHEHE!”
***end of chapter one***
), i took a shower at the locker rooms.
) then, logged on to y!m...bev wasnt online though...sigh...
ang bagal kasi nila eh! i almost forgot my guitar...the trip was, well, surprisingly really fast...though it WAS 6 hours, it only seemed like, well, 2 hours...i drifted in and out of sleep throughout the whooooole trip...i was awake for like...30 seconds, then i fall asleep for a few minutes then wake up....then fall asleep...wake up, doze of, wake up, doze of...oh, you get the picture! when we got to baguio, we went to my tita's house first.....then my cousin's all "may kamukha ka....ung vocalist ng south border! si duncan! ung laging naka bonnet!"...............................umm........is that a good thing or a bad thing? haha...anyway, nothing really interesting happend after that, im about to lie down and err...try to sleep, actually...hahaha....hope i can...well, that's it for now...